I didn't like the Bleep'ish intro, sort of felt like it was cut and arranged wrong. It also gave out a mood that was sort of sudden, since it just.. Went from this buildup of a Bleep and a FX, then into this Gameboy Bass and the Bleep. Didn't sound too good to be honest.
After that, the Stuttering Synth did a pretty good job to compliment some of the things I didn't like. The pads felt a little... cheesy... and I must say, that Gameboy Bass really grew on me going farther and farther into the song. The bleep didn't on the other hand. I didn't have anything against the sound itself, but it did nothing to show off.
I can't say I've heard the the original song, but I might check it out. This as a semi-decent song. And I don't know if anyone else noticed it, but those Drums didn't really stand out or get noticed. The drums sounded as load as a hat, and that's without turning the volume up too high... It needs improvement, but it has it's moments :D