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Gonna go back and do vocals if this one gets some okay viewing and scoring, if not just leave it how it is and strip it from the site.

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The chord progression in the chorus reminds me of the Foo Fighters. This is such a good laid back instrumental.

i like it, but at around 1:20 the keyboard rift could be a little softer, but overall awesome job!!!

LimeDisciple responds:

Thanks man

You've got a good chord progression going on here, and I especially love how it breaks down about 2:15, but guy below me has a point. Now, being an instrumentalist, I don't think you necessarily need a vocal part, but just a melody in general. Sure, the progression is good on it's own, but it's only icing to a nonexistent cake.

Also, I feel like the solos in there went a little off from the main theme, or feel of the progression. The ending was kind of lacking, but at least you know to finish it if not when.

Overall, it has potential, but the piece is only a piece. Make the cake after the icing, and make the decorations fit the whole creation.

LimeDisciple responds:

Nah man, he was right. This was just a demo, and I'm not a good enough vocalist (yet) to lay down a solid lead vocal recording. I wanted to just put something together in a day and work with, presumably because I was bored, this was around 2 years ago. However in that time I've attempted to practice my vocals and become better. Going to put a nice track on it here soon, and I agree with everything else. Thanks for the review brother, rock on.

it'll be one hundred times better when you throw vocals on it. I write play and sing myself. music can sound good period but its the lyrics that capture your listener. but as far as ear as my ears are concerned sounds good. tho i would advise adding an additional solo the second bit of the piano sounded good but the first was a bit off. like it didn't have enough to fill the gap. kinda empty. so keep the second part and just throw in something a little extra =)

Good Music man.

LimeDisciple responds:

My equipment broke down but if it was still operational I'd definatly take the advice. Thanks bro, glad you enjoyed this.

Feels like this should be in a Fancy Pants game... Good job!

LimeDisciple responds:

Thanks.

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Sep 14, 2012
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3 min 38 sec

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