The composition is okay but you have to work on the overall sound as some parts really hurt the ears. With better instrumentation it might be really good stuff. Anyway, scouted since the piece proves that you have a sense for music and I'm confident that you will provide really good works soon enough. Btw, some parts reminds me a whole damn lot of Indiana Jones. :D

Hmm.. maybe you can add a pad that can give a certain ambiance.

Yeah, I agree with thecoreman, needs fleshing out but scouted anyways.

Nice concept, sort of video-game-ish if I'm being totally honest. A very nice melody and counterpoint, but you need to flesh it out more, obviously. Good luck, scouted!