I don't need you [NAC12]

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I don't need you [NAC12]

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Author Comments

Sometimes its best to just say Good Riddance to some people, no matter how close they may be to you.

This is my official entry to NAC12. Its my first time entering a competition here on newgrounds so fingers crossed!
I know its not in your face angry like some of the other stuff entered, I thought I'd add some emotion into it instead of just making some generic industrial track. (No offensive to the other contestants, just not my style).

If you like it be sure to vote on it and if you aren't already following me, consider it? ^^

Enjoy!

[LB]

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messyboi

2012-10-23 17:13:53

This Is Simply Greatness.! Good Work and Keep It Up.!

LazyBucks responds:

Cheers mate

Musicious

2012-10-03 03:43:30

I like it so much. It's very feeling. :)

gadogry

2012-09-25 08:09:55

The lead melody in this one is decent, but your left hand's assault of the piano was somewhat painful to hear... I'm sure both your fingers and your piano were hurt by the end of this.

Worse yet, your two hands are not perfectly coordinated (which is the case except for the best of us), and the notes being off beat are magnified by the uber quick hits by your left hand.

And this to a degree falls into the same trap as Awakening did -- your left hand, despite working very hard here, does some rather monotone things. Bring in some variations! Go nuts! You don't have to stick to the same pattern throughout an entire song.

I can KIND OF see that it could be somewhat angry, but this can be vastly improved I feel. I hope you won't mind my very candid (and kinda harsh) reviews on your music.

LazyBucks responds:

Not at all, constructive feedback is the best kind!

Thank you very much for you your review.

RenegadeSpartan

2012-09-24 04:25:51

The composition for this song was great, but if im honest - I couldn't really find the emotion in this. The piano just doesn't sound natural enough. It sounds more like a keyboard than a Piano. It could also use some more instruments, for example - strings. Piano and Strings go well together. I found the intro to be quite lacking. But regardless, it's still a good song.

LazyBucks responds:

Yeah, it is quite bland. This definitely is a song I'm going to revisit.

Scribbler

2012-09-11 02:49:37

Good stuff. My only gripe is, the piano needs to sound more natural. This is an emotional song. So I need to feel the emotion. And I'm not getting it with the tone of the piano. I hear it in the composition, sure, but not the tone.

LazyBucks responds:

Thanks I guess? I'll try out a different technique next time to try bring out the tone more.