This Is Simply Greatness.! Good Work and Keep It Up.!
I like it so much. It's very feeling. :)
The lead melody in this one is decent, but your left hand's assault of the piano was somewhat painful to hear... I'm sure both your fingers and your piano were hurt by the end of this.
Worse yet, your two hands are not perfectly coordinated (which is the case except for the best of us), and the notes being off beat are magnified by the uber quick hits by your left hand.
And this to a degree falls into the same trap as Awakening did -- your left hand, despite working very hard here, does some rather monotone things. Bring in some variations! Go nuts! You don't have to stick to the same pattern throughout an entire song.
I can KIND OF see that it could be somewhat angry, but this can be vastly improved I feel. I hope you won't mind my very candid (and kinda harsh) reviews on your music.
Not at all, constructive feedback is the best kind!
Thank you very much for you your review.
The composition for this song was great, but if im honest - I couldn't really find the emotion in this. The piano just doesn't sound natural enough. It sounds more like a keyboard than a Piano. It could also use some more instruments, for example - strings. Piano and Strings go well together. I found the intro to be quite lacking. But regardless, it's still a good song.
Yeah, it is quite bland. This definitely is a song I'm going to revisit.
Good stuff. My only gripe is, the piano needs to sound more natural. This is an emotional song. So I need to feel the emotion. And I'm not getting it with the tone of the piano. I hear it in the composition, sure, but not the tone.
Thanks I guess? I'll try out a different technique next time to try bring out the tone more.
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