All in all this really fucking kicks ass. The drum's could use some touching up, slight variations and such, but nothing there to really bog the tune down at all. Your growls are strong, clear and understandable. That's a damn good thing. Whatever you do there, keep it up. As for cleans, it feels like you either are in a key that's uncomfortable or you are singing more in a nasally sort of tone. By no means is it bad. But there is certainly room for improvement. Maybe focus more on practicing your cleans? The guitars are slightly muffled. They don't quite punch like the could, but this is okay because your tone is spot on. If you're recording in a live situation where you have a mic on your amp this is a simple fix. Just look up some info on microphone placement. It's super simple and will improve the final product tenfold. If you're direct imputing right into your computer (or whatever you record with) you'll want to play some more with the mix. Best advice I can give. Have many people listen to it first. No matter how good a musician you are, someone else can catch what you may miss. But still! Kick ass man!
o.o damn man, the song is awesome... love the growling, had a lamb of god vibe to it and that's definitely a plus in my book ! The rhythms, riffs, is really good, very well compose melodic tones :D
The only thing I felt bit off was the Clean vocals, its not bad, but I think it would do better if its less echo-ish and more cleaner, but hey, that's just my thoughts :)
Good job btw, keep it up :D
Thanks for the feed back bro! stick around I actually am doing one lamb of god cover that you'll enjoy! I'll put it up as soon as I'm done with some final touches.
Very Nice Lyrics And All!!! Keep It up.
Thanks for the response bro! I'm happy you enjoyed it! Stick around and keep a close eye out for me, I got plenty more work coming out soon :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.