Now, don't let the score discourage you. If it makes you feel any better you can just check out my songs, they be horrible.
The things that puts me of isn't the song, it's the multiple songs. It feels like you're experimenting, not knowing what you actually want to make. There isn't really any hook or whatever in it. Every time I'm about to get into the groove, something drastically change and keeps on morphing.
In all honestly I'm sure you know what i mean, otherwise you wouldn't be looking for critism, am I right?
All in all, you're on the right track my friend. Thanks for sharing mate! I love all you creators out there. I wish i had the tenacity to keep doing what you do.