i would say its kinda good. but its just loop (><). the bass in the second part of the track seems a bit powerless. the ticking noise is a cool idea though.
and forget about that thing with avicii ;), that guy just has way more experience, you will be as fast when you "train" enough too. besides house music is generally easier to make than trance, especially for avicii, 'cause he only follows the classical house system (beginning, high, drop, down, cooldown, high, drop, down and so on)
well i would say you should finish it, could be interesting to listen to it fully ;).
2.0/2.5
2.0/2.5 (not really my taste, but you used some cool and creative idea and that has to be awarded too right? ^^)
get a four and live with it xP