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chris 2012 fun audio samp


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as i've said, this is a sample of my voice-acting, so its my first time that i submit it as an audio, so, be kind.
tell me what to do to improve or, what should i do.

the voices listed in this are:
-old man
-angry rapper guy

and an epic beatbox tune, just for you!

i hope that you enjoy, and that you will ask me for voice acting, and for more samples!
i also, hope i'm decently o.k.

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Here are some things to improve on.

Speak more clear, not that I couldn't tell what you said, but you did slightly slur some words.

Speak with more energy and more emphasis, it sounds like you're trying to keep your voice low so your roommates or neighbors don't hear you.

Get a pop filter for your mic, also don't speak directly at the mic. Speak at sorta a angle.

You do have a bit of background noise, not much, just maybe put some stuff up around where you record to catch the sound.

Practice, it helps.

Other than that, I really do think your voice is one that can get really good

The old man impression was the best out of them all but very common with the raspy intake. Another way to go about it would be trying to go high pitched and get your voice to crack to appear fragile.

Skipping the second impression cause I really don't know what can help there.

Warrior could be a deeper, stronger voice to give it greater presence. You instead fell back to hollowing it out for an injured take I suppose? For your next go give it a BIG BOOMING HOWL (!) just think what would the Dohvakiin do?

"Beat"boxing at the end....way too much air into the mic just scrap that idea to be honest.

chris-the-stick2 responds:

i see. yes, the old man was successful, i could try improving the other voices too.
as for the warrior, i tried to make my impression to look hurt, and/or tired, in order to make it accurate.

uhh, yes, too much air in the mic, that's true. but was my beatbox that bad?

thanks for your review man, it was helpful.

I feel quite bad giving you this low a rating, but seriously dude, your impressions just aren't there.

chris-the-stick2 responds:

i respect your views, but you should tell me how to improve, instead of this.
you really didnt liked any part of it?

Credits & Info

3.57 / 5.00

Sep 1, 2012
7:32 PM EDT
File Info
1.1 MB
1 min 13 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.