I suggest working on the mixing a bit more, the initial transition from Duality sounds really rough.
Here is another snippet of my song
Its my beat.
Here are the lyrics.....
I am not who i was,
TwasâEUTM once long ago
i had control, now its an overflow
of woe, how much longer will i forgo
this free throw, into uncharted life, without reason.
how many times did i want to let go, and start screaming
A crow, stays by window, all season.
that signifies, my sorrow, im metaphorically bleeding
Held down, and fed lies from a demon.
on top of that, the plot deepens, mentally beaten, by legions,
who throw out reason, and believe an invisible Jesus.
Are you getting my thesis? Cause im feeling defeated
everyday is repeated, my will power, depleted
no enjoyment, no ointment to relieve the pain
my poison, i deal with it everyday
my welcome is overstayed
my emotions are slipping away
nothing feels the same
Just lock me in a cage, and watch me decay
Just fuck everything and go away
I suggest working on the mixing a bit more, the initial transition from Duality sounds really rough.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.