It Just seemed like your sounds were thrown into the room and argued with one another rather than creating a nice construction. At least the beginning anyways. The end was really nice. If it was your intention to be a little more... abrasive, with the intro, then my apologies, because that was achieved.
I do agree with you, it is a bit of a jumble at the beginning. I wrote the beginning and the end at different times so I was definitely in a different state of mind. Had originally planned for it to be just kinda noisy but I changed my mind later on and never went back to making it work better together. Thank you for the review!