This is sick i love it hope to hear more and when i mean more i mean i want MORE!!! :D

Hey, this sounded pretty cool. It's had a cool funk feel at the intro which I quite liked. I liked the different tunes that came in and out, it might have been nice to have some variation in the underlying chords that backed up a lot of the song but that's just my opinion, given the length it's alright to do. (quite a short trance haha) If you wanted to extend your song I reckon adding in some variation there would sound nice. Also the synth at 0:49 was just a tad loud to me and distracted me a bit but that wasn't a very big problem. All in all I quite liked it, there's potential here. Keep at it , and good luck in your VG design study :)