When I first started to listen I thought that maybe this had been put under the wrong genre but up on reading the author comments and seeing "Dream Theater" being mentioned I thought that it might have got a bit heavier, maybe I'm thinking of the wrong band. The name Rotten is a little confusing to as you think Rotten, heavy metal. This should be pretty heavy shit. Anyway thats trivial stuff so can't judge too harshly for that.
For what it was it was a good song and I did enjoy it. I found it to kind of relaxing in a strange way as for your comment about the guitar being way too loud I don't think it was that loud to be honest. I think it adds to the song, it'd seem a tad more boring if that was made to be more quiet.
So, yeah. Good song just maybe think of better names ;).