This is the next best song to your version of "It's a dream". Sorry it took me so long to review but here it is finally. This is definetly your second best song. You seriously have to come back and make more of this for us man.
Good to see new guys.
This song is actually very good, but the one thing I can't get out of my head is how un-original this song is, no offense. The bassline, and the drum work is so cliche... its good, but its cliche.
When the melody comes in, it sounds good, but the bass synth doesn't seem to fit the song. Its too 'wah', when the rest of the song is very high ended. You need a big bass that goes like, 'zz'. You know?
Try throwing this stuff under 'dance' next time =)
Excellent work, you would have my 10/10 if this was more original. Keep it up! You have serious potential. Check out my music sometime?