One of the only things I'm good at... lets see how ya did =)
You started it very well, the filtered bassline is magnificent. The synth ticks add just the right feel. Everything you do is an obvious sign of effort.
When the real drums come in, everything seems kind of awkward... the snare rush gets way too loud, then it doesn't even eally finish? It seems like the snare rush is 3 bars, when if could have been 4 just to make it seem more equal.
The arp you bring in after you bring in the drumns and all that sounds awesome, but its too low. Turn it up, or EQ it to a higher frequency.
The entire is amazingly arranged and excecuted for your first try at Goa. Awesome work, and keep it up! =D Check out my music sometime?