Not bad, but definitely could be better. The lyrics are great but the problem is that the voice is too faded. You need strong vocals for a song like this. Fix up the guitar solo around 2.20, that's just terrible. It sounds terrible. Definitely reconsider the genre, this doesn't really fall under Trance. It has too much of a Metal feel to it for it to really seem like a Trance song. The lyrics are great, and for the most part the song is great in general. But the vocals need to be stronger. The one thing that must be kept in mind is that Vocals must always be able to be heard. If the instruments overpower the vocals, then you've stuffed up and need to raise the volume of the vocals. I've seen many songs go wrong because they added some sort of silly effect to the vocals when they really should have just left them alone. This song is definitely no exception. Regardless, good song, needs improvement.
This is really well put together. The music and lyrics fit nicely. I can picture buying this after you've signed to some big record label.
Unfortunately, I'm confused on how it's "trace." Seems more like Metal... Or Metal / Trance.
You might consider putting an instrumental version up, if you haven't done so already.
Though, I don't agree with the previous reviewer Sacrosanct... I actually enjoy the vocals... Mainly because it fits in as ambient noise rather than actual lyrics. (Like listening to a song in a foreign language.)
Everytime i see a song with vocals on newgrounds I immediately leave the page, because the vocals always ruin what could be a very good song.
This is no exception.
music is good, but I don't really think of the defeated titans with it. It sounds more like a rise up type song.
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