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Hesitant Love Confession

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Yep, you guessed it. This came from my practice with G Major. Original.

I am also willing to share the story here.

Characters: The Girl- Alice (sounds pretty to me!) The Boy-Nathan (Pretty also! It's actually a name I'm using in my book, and I couldn't think of anything else)

The girl's footsteps could be heard coming to the bench, where the boy was waiting. Exhausted of running as fast as possible, she tried to catch her breath.

She couldn't. She couldn't breathe when he was there. When he was there near her, she felt very hot, but never because of the air conditioning. When he was speaking, she would rather listen to him than her own best friend. When he smiled, she tried to capture the image, like a camera would. It would keep the image until it died.

"Umm, you're Alice, right?" He got up. "DId you want to say something?"

Alice blushed. "Yes, Nathan...I did..."

"What did you call me for?"

Alice hesitated. She felt like she wanted to run away and turn back, but she couldn't.

It was too late to do so.

She didn't want to talk very long or shove the matter into him, so she tried her very best. Studdering and blushing, those were the only two things she could do around him....

Holding out her gift and hesitantly confessing, Alice thought she had done very bad and thought that Nathan would turn her down.

The rain started pouring upon the two.

The sky was crying over the love she gave to him for the first time, while crying over the thoughts of rejection and the choice that would change her life forever. The sky was crying over how brave she was, despite her only ability to hide herself so well that she was invisible. The sky was crying over the moment between the two, alone in the afternoon with the rain soaking them wet.

As she finished, the boy smiled. Finally, Nathan said, "Fine, then."

This story was not given revision yet, as I am lazy to do so.

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Sounds just like that first love. =3
Kudos to you, my fair lady, and please, oh please, keep uploading your awesome work. 5/5 and 10/10.

FreesiaRose responds:

:3 Thanks! I'll try to compose more songs! Inspiration is hard to come by where I live, though... :P

man this is awesome!!!!
wish I had the sheet music to it or a .flp

good job man!

FreesiaRose responds:

Thanks for your opinion! :D

Sorry. I only write music with my mind. (I'm good at writing. Books.) If you want, you can try to find the matching chords on G Major. :) Good luck!

I appreciate your comment!

This song is aptly titled, although I think one cool thing about it is that it could easily fit into a few scenes of varied emotion. I really like it.

Keep up the good work!

FreesiaRose responds:

I was thinking about a person (let's say, it's a girl...) trying to confess to the other person (her love, the guy...well...yeah...and the girl is me! DX Not really. I haven't confessed anything yet. Well, I'm pretty hesitant at love speeches...)...and pretty much I was thinking about it the whole way I was composing this. You can read the story in the Author's Comments section.

:) Thank you for your support, SirUndead!

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Aug 23, 2012
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2 min 45 sec

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