Good, except for the "stutters"
Don't get me wrong, the might of the classical genre has seen a generous nod toward it in this piece, where you have tried to meld it with more modern styles, which is acceptable, as it has been done before, though personally, I would not have gone with the stutters - it makes it sound like the track is buffering and I know that my internet connection is not that slow.
You've made a nice start with the basic classical sound and I think that I would like to hear it taken further, perhaps developed into something more than just a string backing track - perhaps combine it with synths, to give a different sound, but suitable modernised, to take it forward. I just think that while your idea is good, the execution alienates purists more than other tactics would.
It's something to consider at least.
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Much appreciated man.
One thing I would have done is added a long bass drone to make the song a bit more soothing and relaxing. I'd say the melody doesn't fail though. Good job with your music.
Appreciate the feedback bro.