[responding to previous review and response]
Please tell me you wrote "a gang of skinny puppies" on purpose, and not because you want to make us who have been listening to Skinny Puppy for that long feel old :).
Just wondering how do you compose your drum tracks, because I was hearing a little offbeat in the timing at the beginning, It seemed to straighten up midway tho, this has got potential, my personal advice is focus on putting some more varied drum loops together for a little while for some exercise, I like the notes ur working with, but the band pass on the lead synth was a wee bit overdone. kinda reminded me of some early Skinny Puppy :)
I am aware of that gap
The part where it goes off beat was has no snap on the grid, while the track was supposed to have it set on the line.
Also after you said that it sounds like a gang of skinny puppies, I am now constantly imagining them barking to my track ;D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.