You have a very Skream-ish sound in the beginning of this song.
I enjoy the sound you have for this one far more than your later pieces. Your use of sound effects really works well for the most part.
The first real complaint I have is the suddenness of the transitions. The piano comes out of nowhere, when it would be better off being *eased* in. And the transition after that is even more blaring. The ending is also fairly abrupt, but would work for easing in the next song in an album.
The parts themselves are nice, but the transitions need work. By far your best that I have heard thus far.
I shall be keeping my eye on you :)
OKay, thanks very much for your feedback. I'll fix those problems in my future songs.