Too much Crap going on
It was kind of unpleasant, like mixing ketchup with Milk...
A lot of chaos here. I understand you want it to be a bit frantic to suit a fight-scene, but I think you really need to think about the song a little bit more in terms of co-ordinating all the parts. There is a lot of jarring and off-key components which don't really help the track. Sometimes you have to hold back on some parts, and subdue them, so when you do let them out fully they have maximum impact. That throaty, pitch sliding synth is way too overpowering. And there is a fairly annoying distorted rhythm that blankets the whole track that definately needs to go.
You probably need a more pronounced bass-line as well.
Keep trying, I give it 3.