I like the pensive mood at the beginning and the atmosphere. The piano sample is of pretty good quality, and the progression comes together well by around :32. There might’ve been a tad too much reverb in the texture, and I thought the entrance of the drums at 1:04 was a little sudden. The piece is well-structured overall, but the fade-out ending struck me as a bit lazy. I also think you could use more contrast in the energy and volume levels in the texture in order to maximize the emotional appeal of the piece. Still, the composition is smooth and the bright and airy feel of the piece is rather enjoyable. Keep at it, shadow-ghost! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8/10