Amazing song! Very progressive it's a shame others can't appreciate something so wonderful. You are a blessing to music and keep up the good work!

it almost seems like you took a bowl of rice and threw it on the ground, and used that for note mapping. this song has no direction or understanding of any music theory behind it. key changes were all over the places. You had melodies that were in dissonance the entire time due to the fact they didn't fit in the key you had it. Heavy on the harsh sound effects, no leads ins or transitions, no fade outs or effects.