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I... I dnt know what to say man... :| Its creepy...

This either is a programme piece, or a piece with no direction.... if it is the latter, it's going to gash the piece quite a bit. If it's the former, I can understand. I still could sense the main melody coming back, which is good. The only thing is that Section I and Section II seem completely disjointed, one from the other. Makes me wonder.......

There are abrupt stops around 1:48.... Did gash my eyes a bit. Then 2:28.... Oh man <3 That ping-pong violin....

It's definitely a good inspiration you've got there, and I have to say that other than what I mentioned, I can tell that you're musically sound.

Again, all the best with the RAC!

Its like Zafrece said It has very enjoyable parts but some that are really random as hell.

At times i enjoyed parts of it allot. however there again was little to no direction in any of it. The leads were out of key, transitions happened sporadically at best. 40 to about 1:40 was good, it had a nice beat to it, good effects in it, very nice drum lines i might add. then it the wonderful stained glass you had made up until then was shattered by the phase following it. I cant tell if you are using loops in some of these parts or are just good as hell as making drum beats. Either way keep it up.