Fascinating work as always. Geat song to relax to!
It's good! You really build up your sound well. I understand it's trance but if you throw in a hard synth lead towards the end it would work nicely. A big ending might give it an edge.
Hmm... Your idea is nice, indeed. I wanted to make a piece which simply calms the heart and soul of everyone - a zen piece, to be a little funny :p
I might use your idea here on a future project, though. That is, if I don't forget.