Sweet song

Awesome I love it its sweet i used it in one of my movies and overall funny name Dark Hallways (Dark Version) teehee

Well...

I'd say it's a pretty average loop, no offense.
This applies to both songs as they are almost identical. The melody is good, the weird soud you have in the middle was not to my liking very much.

This would have been alot better if the drums would have been more present. Some snares wouldn't have hurted anybody :)

Keep it up though, you can't succeed on the first try. I'll be checking your audio in some days and i hope that you will have a new song on here.