Well I think it's a decent piece it's a bit too sort I can see you adding some nice depth to this with much more sounds and instruments in the background but I like what you have done here just make it longer if you can because it will be a much better piece for it anyways nice job on this one
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sounds more instruments sounds
It's got a nice tribal touch to it! Ambient and smooth, though that bit of silence at the end does get in the way. Keep it going!