I agree that the voice leading does leave a bit to wish for, someone of an educated caliber could actually take it somewhere. You seem like someone actually studying music, while I am not. I would definitely try 4-part writing, but I always thought that was more for choral type pieces? Anyways, this particular piece exemplifies my terrible work ethic since it was all written in around four hours. So it ends stupidly because...that's how I thought it should end. Basically, I agree that it's like a build-up that doesn't go anywhere. Though I have to disagree with it being repetitive. In a rhythmic sense, okay fine. I'm awful at being rhythmically creative. But I think I added enough sparkly aesthetics to mask it effectively, at least to the passerby listener. Anyways, thanks for giving a review that wasn't "great job." Keep on tellin' the classical kiddies what's up. Or some riffraff. And maybe take a listen to some of my other stuff too ):