The background music is cool, but it'd be better if there was just music after 00:18, or at least sparce audio clips; the beginning of the audio makes me think there's going to be a cool lead into a build-up of music after "I will rip you to shreds". If there could be a few clips with some echo or fading effects throughout that didn't overpower, that'd be awesome. I like how the beat matches the mood of the scene!
Thanks for the review. Great points. It has been year since I made this. I remember thinking at that time that I wanted to produce short tracks that capture a scene and give a little something interesting to take you on a quick journey. I absolutely could have been more musical with it. I agree. It is now lost and will remain as is.