Not bad, but it's too short, for one. Also, it's supposed to loop, obviously, but it doesn't connect right. It doesn't sound right when it goes from the end to the beginning. If those were fixed, this could be really good.

its a good start to what should be a full song because it sounds grate but its a loop so i suppose it pree good overall i really hope to see a full song with that theam

Awesome