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This is a sad-ish techno trancey song that I wrote today. Please listen to the whole thing!

It's funny how this song is 4:30. I used to have a lot of difficulty writing songs that were even 3 minutes long, but now it's a process that just happens. Maybe I need to trim them down.


P.S. ArcaneSoul, I stole one of your tricks :D


This song has quite a variety. It's great for those who have ADD X)

What trick? lol

Also the melodies in here just didn't ring to me that well i dunno.

And don't worry, it is almost impossible for me now to make a 4:00 song without is going longer XD

johnfn responds:

When you do a build up you bend a string a full octave and have it finish right when the build up ends. It makes a build up much more exciting. Probably this isn't *just* your trick. :D

I agree, the melodies here are not spectacular - my sad songs usually have less exciting melodies. Something to work on. Thanks for the review.

Not my favorite of your songs. Kind of felt like you were trying to do too many things in this song. I don't mind variety, but it felt like there was a little too much in this one.

johnfn responds:

Heheh, thanks. I wrote this piece pretty fast so parts of it lack some polish I agree... Should teach me to slow down and think.

Also, now that you and a few people customarily listen to my music, I worry about whether you guys will like it or not - especially when I submit a song like this which I like but don't think is a masterpiece. It's enough to make me want to hold off on a release until everything is perfect, but I think that would lead to me never releasing anything. So I release a lot of quantity hoping to occasionally notch quality as well.

Thanks for the review.

Terrific song i love it hope to hear more!! :D

johnfn responds:


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Credits & Info


3.22 / 5.00

Aug 10, 2012
3:02 AM EDT
File Info
6.3 MB
4 min 34 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.