all of ur music shows so much potential but is all so short u should upload the whole song not just a part

You use a lot of the same samples throughout different songs, and it's obvious.
Your strings are too legato in my opinion for this piece (But of course they aren't REAL strings so you can probably just turn down the attack knob on the VST)
It's also clipping. Pretty badly.
You're not bad. You do need some work.
Just don't get ahead of yourself.

On a side note, if you double up your kick drum with a less present bass drum, you can get a huge punchy sound. Like in my track Metro Thunder. You should listen :P

"YEA, YOUR PROJECTS HAVE GOOD TASTE! CHECK ME OUT AT MDCNPG2011 WHEN U GET A CHANCE...." Only messing man. That's not half bad. Too short though. Keep making great music. :)