I think the vocals are very poorly cut. Next time you could try cutting different parts of the sample of maybe playing with the pitch. They sound out of tune (even though there's only 2 notes playing) and they stop abruptly.
The intro was quite flat and uninteresting. I'd suggest thinking about how you'd like your track to sound before throwing all of your patterns down. Build some suspense and excitement for the listener! Take us on a journey with your music!
The chorus was pretty sweet. That main bass you have is very nice. Deep, fat and greasy. Just really not a fan of the vocals. I'd also suggest that you create some macro controls for the settings of the bass which you can automate, to make it more interesting to listen to (as opposed to hearing the exact same bass noise throughout the WHOLE track).
Good effort. I think you need to work on your vocals and song structure. But you've nailed the bass design, but there is still room for improvement! :)