The main synth is alright, but It could have used some LP and fading and what not to give it a more real house sound.
The laughter is cool. ouob
"Go" is too loud, then I feel like the drums, specifically the kick, were weak. And the snare could use more punch, less trebles.
Then the new synth is also cool, but still put some automated LP on that.
at 2:08ish, there's some rhythms happening with the main synth, when you do those, try to take some of the attack and release off of the synth to give it a more staccato feel. they feel like they're lagging behind.
overall it's a nice little re-creation.
I'd appreciate if you'd check out my tunes, too. c: