lets hear the final! i see potential in this song

Bad ass syncopation at the end, man! I'm still working on the other piece. Just gotta balance creative work with school. I'll get it to you soon.

it shows you things...... HORRIBLE. THINGS........

What a TEEASE.

Hey there!

This has got power! Would suit perfectly to some id Software game like doom. Maybe the conversation within the track is a little bit too long (event horizon?). The crunches are well done. I Think if you will work the track over a little bit it could become really cool.

So long story short: Talking sequence --> too long, music-parts --> pretty cool!

Chris