Sounds very familiar. Is this a remix or did you record those intruments yourself? Because whoever did is showing some excellent musical skill.
Also, I fucking loved your drums. They reminded me of the Gorillaz.
the synth bass at 1:15ish was not good. try something less melodic and more pumping maybe.
The sample slicing was pretty cool, but I think it could have had more attention put into it, and try not to mix slicing strings and vocals together, it sounds awkward.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.