I'll try to scout you, This is AWESOME!!
I'm not in the best mood right now, but listening to stuff like this on NG helps. I've been listening to music here for a decade and that there are still artists like you who need to be scouted gives me hope for the audio portal.
Nothing was out of place, you avoided being too repetitive and used complex rhythms. I've recommended you for the Audio Portal.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.