This is great, I particularly enjoyed near the end at around 4:00 and on.
Some random thoughts:
I LOVE the intro melody.
Wow, great piano breakdown at 1:11!! This is your best melody by far. It's REALLY GOOD.
Alright, the sounds really mix together at 1:45. Pan them out, put one on the left and one on the right, it'll be PERFECT. Same comment at 3:22.
That beat at 2:20. Needs more hi-hat. Needs more punch.
Whoa, build up to something really cool at 3:40ish. My main issue is that your sounds are kind of mixing together.
The instrument at 4:00 sounds kind of distorted at the high ranges. Careful.
Thinking about it a little more, that instrument for the intro melody may be the wrong one... I'm not sure, I'd have to fiddle around with the project itself.
Anyway, this song is really great!! Be sure to pay close attention to detail and it'll be even better. Keep it up. Exciting music!
Thanks for the in depth review! It's always good for me to get advice that can help me out like this.
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