Love the vocals that start at 0:45, they give it style and flavor. Nice job.
And just artist to artist... We are rarely satisfied are we? Thats what keeps us striving!
Good work, personally i would have used a bass that didn't sound as.. well not bitty because bitty is good, but less video game-ish. I spend most of the that it takes to make my songs, on getting that perfect base. Its hard sometimes, but good on ya!
Nice work! Keep it up, i see some potential.