The score kinda looks bad, but optimistically I can give you the other half of those points when you finish the other half of the song ;-)
This is sounding good so far. My main criticism is that I don't hear that much of a difference from the song other than the new percussion. I'll admit that I haven't actually listened to the source material that much, so I'm probably not picking up all of your nuance - sorry about that.
Keep me updated.
(I don't vote low, that's too contentious anyways.)
Well the rest of the orig song is very good. I just wanted to change the bass, kicks etc etc.