HOLY CRAP THIS IS SO HEAVY UGHHH I'M STRAINING UNDER THE WEIGHT...
Heh, I don't usually listen to heavy techno, so you'll have to forgive me... I like the chord progression you were using - it's nice! my main criticism is that when the really heavy bass comes everything gets really really muddy, especially on the low end. Do you have some crazy amount of reverb on your kick or something?
I'd also maybe like some sort of detuned saw doing some cool melody or something.
By the way, along with what EternalEndeavor said, this song is quite repetitive. I personally prefer shorter songs that are less repetitive - as a listener, I can always just put them on loop if I like them, plus as a songwriter you get to optimize your melodies and things over less time, so you can make them better!
Anyway, keep at it! (And don't take the "low" review personally - I try to review so that 5 is average.)
Thanks for the review. Well. ive tried to optimise the bass because it was so loud depending on which earphones you was using. The kick is done with another 3 kicks together and changing things. And for the track i wanted to do it quite repetitive because i like chilling with my own track. :p ). i know i have a long way till i manage better the eq and the compresors and everything. Thanks for the review and check out my other tracks.
it was a cool track man. Very repetitive though, by about a minute I had heard the whole thing and at about 3:25 it felt like you tried to put an outro on it but it felt unnatural because the song kind of faded off before the outro began.
but definetly a cool arp/lead you have going in there and the drums/bass are intense so i give 4/5 here and a 5/5 on the sub =]
When i first tought about making this track i was chilling watching the moon on a dark night, got motivated and done this. This is why maybe you feel a little bit repetitive, but i really wanted to make a chilled hardtechno track.