I am not going to go into the whole religion thing, safe to say that I find religion's hypocrisy nauseating as you thank the Lord - in his might - for something he also - by context of belief - put upon you in the first place.
Regardless of that, the music was good but not of epic proportions. I felt that some parts repeated itself a bit too much throughout the song. When the violins in the middle started up, my hopes got lifted some, but for some reasons you fell back on the old repeat of tune, which I felt composed around 75% of the entire song.
It was a potentially epic song, but due to its repetitive nature, I shave off an entire stare. It's good, and it's something nice to build on to as it has potentials, but it needs refining and some work to become something more.