DenX - Dismissed

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Hello Newgrounds.
This song is dedicated to my dear father.
He was like 'haunted' by a disease for years.
Now, 1 1/2 weeks ago he got released of this pain by god but the price was high..
He lost his eyesight.

This song is for him and will be on the actual album as Outro.

Thanks for listening!

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I am not going to go into the whole religion thing, safe to say that I find religion's hypocrisy nauseating as you thank the Lord - in his might - for something he also - by context of belief - put upon you in the first place.

Regardless of that, the music was good but not of epic proportions. I felt that some parts repeated itself a bit too much throughout the song. When the violins in the middle started up, my hopes got lifted some, but for some reasons you fell back on the old repeat of tune, which I felt composed around 75% of the entire song.

It was a potentially epic song, but due to its repetitive nature, I shave off an entire stare. It's good, and it's something nice to build on to as it has potentials, but it needs refining and some work to become something more.

Very very touching, that combined with that sad story creates a very emotional-impacting song, very nice job.

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Jul 25, 2012
5:58 AM EDT
File Info
10.1 MB
4 min 25 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.