its a cool track man, and I love that piano more than anything in this mix. but I feel like I heard the whole thing half way through. It seemed like you evolved block by block and once you had everything it flatlined around 55 seconds the only other time it had a real change was the piano.
give it more structure, breaks where you take elements away, and releases where some new instruments come in to change it up a bit.
But I get that its an experimental track and your probably just messin around trying stuff out so im not judging to harsh here.
all in all it was a cool track 4/5 here and 5/5 on the submission =]
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