I can see why rucklo likes you
you's two should get a collab going or something, your amibent work is really good, you really need to make more of this stuff, a very good first submission.
...this was really interesting, I have to say! Liek you mentioned in the description, there are loads of interesting ear-candy all around. I really enjoyed all the small things in here, loads of potential. There´s some slighty disted things going on that crunches away ina really smooth manner, the background reverbed beat is really suitable in there.
A few pointers you might wanna think about;
The snare, nah i just couldn´t go with it. A suggestion here is to layer the snare, and remove some of the layers in different places where most suitable.
The baseline is ok, but the bass used is honestly very lifeless. Alone (it´s allmost solo in some part) it sounds decent, but in the mix it takes up way too much space, and is also very monotone and boring (too clean, i would dare say...). This in most other aspects being an interesting ear-candy based song is getting backfired from that bass.
Towards the end you single out some instruments and sounds, I think you should try consider building the song a little more. There are things going on indeed, but there´s not really a good feeling i get from the buildup... it gets monotone quite quickly, and even though i hear loads of interesting things going on, these needs to stand out more in the mix. Othervise llistener (I :) loose interest.
Nice first submission though, It´s clear you´ve been using reason for a while!!! :)
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