So, I gave this a three, but I wanted to give it more.
I live breathe and eat house. When I'm not listening to house, EDM or trance, I'm reading about it. And that automatically colored how I viewed the song, because, objectively? This is a pretty healthy tune.
What killed me was that this whole selection sounded like a build-up to something greater. It struck me as something that would be produced by a big name like Suspect 44 or Daniel Kandi- really, the notes struck me as reminiscent of tracks I've heard by them. I'm not looking for a "drop"- what I'm looking for as a shift in tune, a build to a metaphorical climax, the next step in the journey that every good house song is.
I saw in your comments that you hadn't added percussion except for a kick. So, if you make this longer, more detailed, and with a solid percussion line (maybe something to compliment the melody instrumental that breaks in at :34), this will become more than a "first step". It'll become that journey I spoke about.
Good work. For everyone's sake, keep producing. For real.