for this not being your specialty it sounds great! but as i saw your replied already, i agree that your drum sounds could use a little work. your snare has more his when it needs more hit.
the lead sounds great but is just a little too loud. its DNB so those should be the focus as far as leveling the tracks.
i love simple sounding synths so the square and the gated synth sound great to me.
one thing i might try too is if you were to throw another bass line that was all low fq. tends to add another layer to the bass that makes large audio systems just shine in holy glory. XD
anyway, other than the aforementioned, this track is amazing. i think i like it more than the current DNB leader for this month. with a little work this could be a masterpiece!
keep up the good work and id love to see this track redone! 5/5, 4.5/5
if you need some more drum samples, id check out looperman.com or if you want y ou can just get a hold of me. im always willing to lend a helping hand or collaborate!
Oooooh. You were in the Pure Drum & Bass turntable room. I go there too. This song is amazing. Love the epic square lead :D
Thanks! Yeah, I typically (once I figured out how) do dubstep, but I have always enjoyed doing every genre; I can't just stay in one.
The choirs remind me of Zelda.
Not your best work, but it wasn't all that bad to listen to.
This is expected, since DnB isn't your specialty.
The lead is a bit too loud. The choirs are decent though and the gate is a nice touch.
Lower the lows on the bass a bit.
Overall I myself am pleased with how it turned out. Except that I know the drums could use a little work. I might just go back and tweak it a little.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.