It's good! Good vocals... try to tone down the music so you can hear it better... sometimes its a bit hard to hear the words, but i'm sure you'll do that in the full actual version. :) Well done with the shifting melody...
Thank you! Yea issue with the vox was 1. I was using a very iffy condensor mic and 2 I was recording with cool edit not really knowing what I was doing, lol. But thanks. :)
ahhh could be better
Well this is a very rough demo keep in mind, many things in this track need to be improved, but what's layed out here is mainly the concept. A full mastered/reworked version will be finished within the next few days.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.