intro was a ;little long and the rest of the song seemed to repeat itself for most of the song. this is just my thoughts but the song in general is good.
A dark tune with a fairground vibe, very considerable as the theme of a sinister freak show. In it's current state still very simplistic, but can and most likely will turn out to be something very interesting and immersive that will get your imagination going about things in jars. The metal sounds in the beginning don't seem intense enough to me at this point, amp that shit up and add some more industrial grit to it and it'll be an awesome intro. Could also serve as a really cool transition from one song to another.