Not a bad song, but I think the melody and chords could have been better. I did like the buildup though. I think your song "Survivor" is better than this.
Yeah, it was hard trying to create a melody for this song for some reason; and while I personally like this one better, I'd choose Survivor over this one to show other people.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.