This sounds absolutely amazing, I'm impressed with your works!
If I had any critique to give, It's that the opening is slightly weak, I think if you removed the horrible sound, that I don't know how to describe sound.. @ 00:09 - 00:15!
I truly, honestly believe~ removing it would make this sound a whole lot better, you should consider going back to this one, and TECHNOFY The Beginning.
hehe. ^_^ Great job nontheless~ @_@ <3unoaw
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.