I needed to warm up a little to the song... but that's not necessarily bad. Some of the sounds sounded the slightest bit out of place... like at 1:09.
Heheheh, my favorite section was from 1:28 to 1:34. Pseudo-build up galore!!!
This song needs some percussion and a backbone that won't make it seem so shallow. What do you use to make the sounds in this song?